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Offline GIRISH22

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From wildrness
« on: April 19, 2014, 06:22:14 PM »


  Your feedback please

Offline Jasii

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Re: From wildrness
« Reply #1 on: April 20, 2014, 08:57:19 AM »
Nice Girish ji! If you can revisit the place, do shoot again with one object as an anchor, maybe from the rocky face side?
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Offline GIRISH22

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Re: From wildrness
« Reply #2 on: April 20, 2014, 10:53:42 AM »


  Thanks, Jassiji

  Point noted

Offline ISO

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Re: From wildrness
« Reply #3 on: April 20, 2014, 12:56:57 PM »
Superb

Offline Sandeep

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Re: From wildrness
« Reply #4 on: April 20, 2014, 01:13:04 PM »
Hi Girish..Sorry..the image is not working for me.

Somethings which you can do to get better results:

- Avoid shooting nature in bright afternoon sun..it looks much beautiful during the golden hours
- Keep things un-cluttered..In this case that would've been either by zooming in tight on just one of the shrubs..OR.. if you wish to show a wider view then zoom-out...then go as close to the shrubs as possible..and then move around till you get the shrubs against most elegant, non-intrusive background as possible.
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Offline HansrajVyas

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Re: From wildrness
« Reply #5 on: April 20, 2014, 02:43:06 PM »
Nice one except the clutter !

Offline dashillol

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Re: From wildrness
« Reply #6 on: April 20, 2014, 03:38:20 PM »
Nice play with lights. I liked the shot.
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Offline GIRISH22

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Re: From wildrness
« Reply #7 on: April 20, 2014, 07:04:40 PM »

 Thanks, Mukundji,Sandeep, Hansraj and Deshillol For kind words,

 Sandeep points r noted

Offline Brendon

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Re: From wildrness
« Reply #8 on: April 20, 2014, 08:20:47 PM »
Hi Girish, you need to have clear subjects in your photos. Something that any viewer will lock on to and appreciate.

Any good photo will have something the eye can stop and look at before moving on.

Unfortunately in your photo there is nothing really standing out that my eye locks on to. My eyes keep wandering throughout the photo without really locking on to anything for more than a second.

I suggest you try to keep things simple. Concentrate on a single subject that will hold a viewers attention. For e.g. those shrubs in the foreground are somewhat interesting and a greater focus on them could have improved the photo.

Coming to things I do like about the photo, the lush green is quite pleasing to the eyes and the yellow shrubs do give some balance to the greens.

Good effort though. Keep shooting  :like:

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Re: From wildrness
« Reply #9 on: April 20, 2014, 11:03:59 PM »
all has been said..  one thing from me..  middle of the day can be worked on too..  high contrast black and white

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