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Offline DG

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A simple lowlight portrait
« on: June 19, 2015, 02:21:04 PM »
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Offline Jasii

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Re: A simple lowlight portrait
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2015, 12:00:21 AM »
Great connect! Loved the pic. The door on the right competes for attention......
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Re: A simple lowlight portrait
« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2015, 08:45:43 AM »
Mother's love, awesome depiction 👍

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Re: A simple lowlight portrait
« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2015, 01:06:51 PM »
Hi DG.

It's a wonderful image that you will treasure.  By way of possible improvement, I would burn the lower left corner a bit with a dark vignette.  This will make mom's arm less prominent.  The child's face could use a bit of lightening, since it has fallen into shadow.  A little bit of "dodging" as we would have said in the days of the wet darkroom.   I think I would crop away the door.  Like Jasii, I sense that it is drawing a little too much attention from the tender moment between mother and child.

Congratulations on the image.

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Re: A simple lowlight portrait
« Reply #4 on: July 18, 2015, 10:04:42 PM »
Hi DG.

It's a wonderful image that you will treasure.  By way of possible improvement, I would burn the lower left corner a bit with a dark vignette.  This will make mom's arm less prominent.  The child's face could use a bit of lightening, since it has fallen into shadow.  A little bit of "dodging" as we would have said in the days of the wet darkroom.   I think I would crop away the door.  Like Jasii, I sense that it is drawing a little too much attention from the tender moment between mother and child.

Congratulations on the image.

:)
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