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Offline Sunny.bhat

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Bird
« on: August 07, 2017, 06:33:23 PM »
Pls share your thoughts to help me improve..

Offline LightWave

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Re: Bird
« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2017, 02:55:17 AM »
Is that the natural colour of the bird?

Offline Sunny.bhat

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Re: Bird
« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2017, 02:19:02 PM »
No the yellowish/ Brownish part was much lighter sir

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Re: Bird
« Reply #3 on: August 09, 2017, 12:08:36 PM »
Is that the natural colour of the bird?

I am also more of purist type (when doing nature) I do not like too much of deviation in white balance.
Both images are over saturated for me. On composition front there can be improvement
if you are placing your subject towards right in both these image.
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Offline Hankosaurus

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Re: Bird
« Reply #4 on: August 09, 2017, 11:59:52 PM »
Interesting photo subjects.

By way of improvement, I think I would like the saturation turned down a bit too.  The printed matter is distracting to me, needs to be suppressed or removed, IMO.   On my monitor the red flower is blown out, lacking detail information in the sea of red.

Thanks for sharing.

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Re: Bird
« Reply #5 on: August 11, 2017, 02:58:37 PM »
I don't know what should be said, Basically, do these images show what you wanted them to be.?
As a critic, yes it is Over Saturated, white balance is deviated to an extent wherein it has changed the color tone/temperature completely.
In the end, if this was the desired result and works for you then... OK


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Offline Sunny.bhat

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Re: Bird
« Reply #6 on: August 16, 2017, 01:44:09 PM »
thanks for valuable suggestion,

will try to implement suggestions